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Posts about Boarding Pass
January 13th, 2010

I had a similar experience the other day. I was at Wal-Mart (do NOT get me started on those idiots. Just. DON’T.) when I realized that the miserable NEANDERTHAL at the register had clearly made a few mistakes — I had purchased two hairdryers (I have extremely long hair deal with it) and yet they were NOT in my bag. So I took out my receipt and scanned it for inconsistencies:

What I saw made me FLIP. THE. FARK. OUT.

I was seriously shaking with anger. I cannot believe — cannot believe — that a company as large as Wal-Mart could get away with just awful design. Postponing my hairdrying for yet another day, I rushed out of the car and back to my Tesla. I was home in no time, and I fired up several instances of every version of photoshop that I have. It took 17 hours, but this is what I came up with:

Wal-Mart? This one is on the house. Try to learn a little something.

First of all - color. Make it pop, yes? NEW typeface (Futura, good for everything). And did I feel constrained by the so-called “size” of the receipt? Also, simplified the information - you don’t need all that crap about coupons and taxes and whatever. Simple numbers, clean, DONE. Function follows form, natch. Lastly, a little bit for the consumer to think about. Is that so hard? Thinking? Have we really fallen so low that we can’t reflect on Eastern Folk religion just because we’re at a big box store? Bringhurst must be spinning in his grave.

Damn That Television commenting on A Better Boarding Pass, in MetaFilter (thanks Phil!)

I have been laughing about this for the last five minutes straight. Tears-in-eyes laughing. Go click on the comment link to see the resulting receipt for even more hilarity.

January 5th, 2010

A completely different use case for the redesigned boarding pass

This is an addendum to the boarding pass redesign I posted earlier today.

My friend Andy pointed out a completely different use case than the one I’d designed for, which was, essentially, me: a single adult traveler who confirms my reservation and checks baggage at the ticket counter or a nearby self-serve kiosk.

Andy’s primary use case is a family traveling together with small children, with pre-printed boarding passes and self-checked luggage. As a result, certain things that aren’t important in my use case become extremely important:

  • The traveler’s name. A single adult traveler will likely never need to double-check their own name on their ticket. The TSA will double-check it against a government ID, and a gate attendant may glance at it briefly.
    In contrast, a traveling parent will likely need to check ticket names and seats several times to make sure everyone boards at the right time.
  • Bar code positions. Bar code positions only matter to travelers that are self-checking baggage. According to Andy, my design wouldn’t work well on the rather temperamental scanning machines, which even now require awkward paper folding and fiddling. To be honest, I’m not sure if any letter-paper sized self-printed ticket barcode would be easy to scan. The much better solution is to let the user enter a simple five-digit ID code or use a credit card for identification, like self-checkin kiosks.
    (Gate attendants will also scan bar codes as travelers board flights, but my original design is serviceable for that use case.)
  • Airport city names. This is primarily a problem on flights with multiple stops, and one that I addressed—minimally—in my design. As Andy pointed out, the passengers you’re in charge of, the more important a clear ticket sequence is.
    Rather than emphasize city names, I favor a simple numerical approach (labeling tickets flight one, two, three, and so on). Color-coded numbers would be even better, of course, though likely not practical.
  • I’m sure there’s other use cases I haven’t thought of yet. Justin also mentioned that the information hierarchy on my ticket still doesn’t make it immediately clear what the traveler should be looking at at any given time. Unfortunately this is because the traveler’s needs change as they progress through the airport; in this comment, I talk about my grand vision to have every stage color-coded.

—Timoni